Discussion of "Renaissance: Flood – Day 364, 11am" by JD_Renaissance

Perfectly done, JD...;o)

I'm very curious why something isn't being done about Norman. I know you've a plan, but it's a little exasperating for me, the reader, to put up with this guy...lol.

Genius twist in the storyline...the Mongerer's simply passed up the Harbinger ship in a race to get back first!!! Great!

I'm actually glad you want me to get rid of Norman - though you know I won't. :) It means I wrote a really nasty character - yay! Lol. No, unfortunately, Norman still has a purpose in the story. He actually has/does/will become the epitome of the real conflict against humanity (referencing back to the very first chapter).:D

(Well, not necessarily get rid of as in do something with, I suppose.) :)

Tomorrow! The complexity of this story line keeps me reading on.
Good work.

Yay, thank you so much! More to come soon. :D

JD, I just want you to squash the little creep when you get done with him, okay? ;) This was outstanding writing. Another twist thrown in my face! Excellent character development. I have a feeling this is sadly coming to an end.

Again, thanks! Don't worry about Mr. Kindle, he'll get his comeuppance. In the mean time, no the story is not coming to an end soon. :) I'm a little over half way there. However, I think I'm going to have to take a break from working on it for a while. Life seems to be getting in the way.

Yes, JD, you wrote an INCREDIBLY nasty guy. (I had disdain for him in his first appearance, but after he hit the puppy - needless to say, his kneecaps are MINE.) I can't wait to see what you have in store for him!

And I'm eager to see what happens next! How will they prepare the camp for a Mongerer attack? Will Mr. Evil seize the confusion for a chance to divide the camp again? I'm so glad I finally got caught up with this story - now I want more!!!