JD_Renaissance |
Date Joined: Nov. 14, 2008
Last Login: May 8, 2013 |
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1003 Comments by JD_Renaissance
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JD_Renaissance 3 months, 1 week ago
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Miss you too, Cheese. Hope all is going well for you as well. |
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JD_Renaissance 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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Keep writing. It's worth continuing. There were few oopsies regarding punctuation, but nothing that detracted from the story. The imagery, pacing, repetition, and overall tone were refreshing; they kept me reading and kept me interested/invested in the character. I'm intrigued as to where you go with this. Well done. |
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JD_Renaissance 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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Welcome to the site, WillowCreek. I can't tell you how refreshing it is to read something actually well written and thought out on this site. I've been a member of SM for several years, but if you visit my page you'll see I haven't truly participated in a while, mostly due to the degradation of quality and unique writing being presented here, as of late. Your chapter has inspired me to momentarily come out from the deep dark corners of mere observation and offer a comment before going back to my usual lurking. Thank you for that. |
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JD_Renaissance 9 months, 1 week ago
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Read an interesting review on a fantasy book I enjoy. It wasn't a very positive review, but some of the comments caught me off guard not necessarily because of the negativity, but because of what exactly the reviewer found distasteful. Namely, the map the author included in the front of the book. Though I can't remember the exact words, this reviewer warned other readers that the sign of a bad fantasy was the inclusion of a map. (One of the co-authors of this book is an amazing and well known fantasy artist, so it wasn't the quality of the map in so much as it was simply including it.) |
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JD_Renaissance 10 months ago
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Good to see you here and sorry to hear about that nastiest of ailments - Writer's block. *Shudders* Blech! |
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JD_Renaissance 1 year, 1 month ago
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Very well written. Emotionally charged and well paced up until the last couple of lines at the end, where the pacing changed from flowing to contrived/forced. For all intents and purposes, well done. |
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JD_Renaissance 1 year, 2 months ago
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Well written, Regz. One of the best I've read on the site in a long while. You achieved, without a shadow of a doubt, the nervous voice you were going for. Incredible. Well done. |
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JD_Renaissance 1 year, 2 months ago
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After receiving some delightful feedback from fellow Mashers, I've published the above chapter, titled: "Cabbage Soup." |
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JD_Renaissance 1 year, 2 months ago
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Sometimes, the best way to fix a story that seems a bear to follow, is to go back a few paces and start again. After reading the two existing chapters for project Zorro, and some recent comments made regarding them, I've tried my hand at an alternative chapter two. If this new chapter somehow offers more inspiration for others to continue and finish the story, hurray. If not, it was a fun exercise in writing for children. This alternate chapter is short, but it does set up conflict and a "mission" for the young protagonist. |
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JD_Renaissance 1 year, 2 months ago
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Thank you so much, Aggie and DJ. Your comments are very much appreciated. :) Good to see you both here again. |
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108 Chapters by JD_Renaissance
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3.4/5.0 - published Mar 23, 2012 - 1 comment (preview)
An anecdote.
Tags: anecdote, bear-attack, boyscouts, bsa, emergency-preparedness-drill, scouts, venturing-crew |
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4.3/5.0 - published Mar 15, 2012 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Feb 05, 2012 - 3 comments (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Jan 27, 2012 - 15 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2011 - 5 comments (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 14, 2011 - 14 comments (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 11, 2010 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 10, 2010 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Oct 04, 2010 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Sep 01, 2010 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.0/5.0 - published Aug 27, 2010 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Aug 20, 2010 - 10 comments (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Aug 05, 2010 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
Coach Halden spots the Volvo as it heads towards the highway. The chase is on.
Tags: kidnapping, killer |
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4.6/5.0 - published Jul 12, 2010 - 14 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Jun 26, 2010 - 18 comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published May 08, 2010 - 17 comments (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Feb 25, 2010 - 9 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Dec 10, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Preparing for the best and the worst.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Dec 10, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Foul reasons and good news.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Animosity increases.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. The race continues.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A house divided...
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Nemesis.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Dec 04, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Confrontation.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 04, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Months have passed and changes are coming.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Nov 28, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A returning threat.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 27, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Visiting Carter, Gloria, and George.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 21, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Solomon.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 21, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Mr. Sharp.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Nov 20, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Life in the camp.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. All hell breaks loose.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Mrs. Shoes.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Nov 15, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A new home.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 14, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A plan of rescue set in motion.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Nov 13, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Marshal revealed.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 13, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Days later.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. More revelations.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Thomas' story.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Thomas has changed.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. In familiar company.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 11, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. The Mongerers leave.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 07, 2009 - 12 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A friend arrives.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 06, 2009 - 12 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Saved?
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Nov 05, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni faces the bear.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 04, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Three ships and their fate.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Oct 15, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. The enemy revealed.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 15, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni meets a friend while preparing to face an enemy.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 11, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 11, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A new purpose.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.7/5.0 - published Oct 09, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Haven.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Friends.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni falls.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A seed of doubt.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni makes a decision.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni wakes up to danger.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 03, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Time has passed back on Earth.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Oct 03, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Destination of the Harbingers.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Oct 03, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A new ally?
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni fights back.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 18 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Second guesses.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Wrath of the Mongerers.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Return of the Mongerers.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Bad news.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 28, 2009 - 17 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni and Thomas meet a Harbinger.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2009 - 12 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2009 - 14 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2009 - 18 comments (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 09, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 08, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 03, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Jul 02, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 01, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 30, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 29, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 28, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 27, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Jun 26, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 25, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published May 23, 2009 - 30 comments (preview)
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4.7/5.0 - published May 11, 2009 - 28 comments (preview)
A woman searches out three friends from her past not expecting what she found.
Tags: friendship, search |
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4.4/5.0 - published May 06, 2009 - 14 comments (preview)
Two young girls discover a strange "goo" is more than it at first seemed.
Tags: discovery, goo, mercury, opals, strange-objects |
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4.6/5.0 - published Apr 13, 2009 - 13 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Apr 13, 2009 - 11 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 07, 2009 - 8 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 06, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
Challenge 2 - A storm rises in a small coastal village and in the broken heart of one woman.
Tags: abandonment, loss, storms |
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4.2/5.0 - published Jan 25, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
Guess my word? Check out the forum if you can't.
Tags: challenge |
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3.7/5.0 - published Jan 10, 2009 - 7 comments (preview)
A man writes his final thoughts in life only to be interupted by an unknown guest.
Tags: last-thoughts, second-chances, suicide-notes |
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3.7/5.0 - published Jan 10, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Dec 30, 2008 - 10 comments (preview)
A hot spring pool calls to a lonely, travel worn young woman in the frosty bitterness of winter.
Tags: hot-springs, winter |
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4.8/5.0 - published Dec 18, 2008 - 13 comments (preview)
A brief look into the strength and tenacity of one woman who never let medical hell stop her from being a blessing to those around her.
Tags: christmas, holidays, medical, true-story |
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4.1/5.0 - published Dec 04, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 22, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
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3.7/5.0 - published Nov 15, 2008 - 27 comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 14, 2008 - 26 comments (preview)
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