JD_Renaissance |
Date Joined: Nov. 14, 2008
Last Login: Aug. 27, 2010 |
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855 Comments by JD_Renaissance
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JD_Renaissance 4 hours, 16 minutes ago
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This is good, Shadinah. I love the deeper insight into the mind of our baddie - investing reader emotion in him adds greatly to the overall story. Well done. |
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JD_Renaissance 4 hours, 21 minutes ago
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Looking good so far, WWB. Love the description of Rose and the bond forming between her and Robin. Also liked the rabbit sensing danger. However, I would break up the text where you switch to the watcher's pov in order to give us readers a visual cue to the change. The plums part was brilliant as was the addition of new conflict/baddies. Can't wait to see this chapter finished! |
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JD_Renaissance 1 day ago
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"A Winter Fail (4)" has been published. Thanks to everyone who gave their two cents and helped me make it a better chapter. :D |
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JD_Renaissance 2 days, 1 hour ago
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One week down, Mashers, one to go before this round's deadline. The sooner we submit and publish, the sooner we'll get to round 4. :) |
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JD_Renaissance 3 days, 23 hours ago
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Congratulations on your six, Al! |
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JD_Renaissance 5 days, 23 hours ago
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Thanks, Aggeloi! |
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JD_Renaissance 5 days, 23 hours ago
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"I was able to fit the lumps within around the protruding bottles" |
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JD_Renaissance 6 days, 3 hours ago
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I agree, Al. This project is a real challenge, trying to keep the voice and feel of each story. Very fun. :D |
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JD_Renaissance 6 days, 3 hours ago
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Thanks DJ. I was so afraid I changed the voice of the main character too much while trying to focus more on Vic. I'm glad there are some good gems in there. :) |
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JD_Renaissance 6 days, 4 hours ago
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Okay. I tweaked and published the above draft and added another chapter. Leaving this as a draft like the last. Hope you enjoy. :D |
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99 Chapters by JD_Renaissance
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-- /5.0 - created on Aug 27, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Sep 01, 2010 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Aug 27, 2010 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Aug 20, 2010 - 8 comments (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Aug 05, 2010 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
Coach Halden spots the Volvo as it heads towards the highway. The chase is on.
Tags: kidnapping, killer |
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4.5/5.0 - published Jul 12, 2010 - 14 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Jun 26, 2010 - 18 comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published May 08, 2010 - 17 comments (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Feb 25, 2010 - 9 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Dec 10, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Preparing for the best and the worst.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Dec 10, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Foul reasons and good news.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Animosity increases.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. The race continues.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A house divided...
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Nemesis.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Dec 04, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Confrontation.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 04, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Months have passed and changes are coming.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Nov 28, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A returning threat.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 27, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Visiting Carter, Gloria, and George.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 21, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Solomon.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 21, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Mr. Sharp.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Nov 20, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Life in the camp.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. All hell breaks loose.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Mrs. Shoes.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Nov 15, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A new home.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 14, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A plan of rescue set in motion.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Nov 13, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Marshal revealed.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 13, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Days later.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. More revelations.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Thomas' story.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Thomas has changed.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Nov 12, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. In familiar company.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 11, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. The Mongerers leave.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 07, 2009 - 12 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A friend arrives.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 06, 2009 - 12 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Saved?
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Nov 05, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni faces the bear.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 04, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Three ships and their fate.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Oct 15, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. The enemy revealed.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 15, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni meets a friend while preparing to face an enemy.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 11, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 11, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A new purpose.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.7/5.0 - published Oct 09, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Haven.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Friends.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.5/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni falls.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A seed of doubt.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni makes a decision.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni wakes up to danger.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 03, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Time has passed back on Earth.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Oct 03, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Destination of the Harbingers.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Oct 03, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. A new ally?
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni fights back.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 18 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Second guesses.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Wrath of the Mongerers.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Return of the Mongerers.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Bad news.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 28, 2009 - 17 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption. Renni and Thomas meet a Harbinger.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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3.9/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2009 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2009 - 14 comments - start of story (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2009 - 14 comments (preview)
The downfall of man before resurrection and redemption.
Tags: post-apocalyptic, rebirth, renaissance, science-fiction |
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 09, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 08, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 03, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Jul 02, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 01, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 30, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 29, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 28, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 27, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Jun 26, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 25, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.8/5.0 - published May 23, 2009 - 30 comments (preview)
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4.7/5.0 - published May 11, 2009 - 28 comments (preview)
A woman searches out three friends from her past not expecting what she found.
Tags: friendship, search |
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4.6/5.0 - published May 06, 2009 - 11 comments (preview)
Two young girls discover a strange "goo" is more than it at first seemed.
Tags: discovery, goo, mercury, opals, strange-objects |
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4.6/5.0 - published Apr 13, 2009 - 13 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Apr 13, 2009 - 11 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 07, 2009 - 8 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 06, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
Challenge 2 - A storm rises in a small coastal village and in the broken heart of one woman.
Tags: abandonment, loss, storms |
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4.2/5.0 - published Jan 25, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
Guess my word? Check out the forum if you can't.
Tags: challenge |
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3.7/5.0 - published Jan 10, 2009 - 7 comments (preview)
A man writes his final thoughts in life only to be interupted by an unknown guest.
Tags: last-thoughts, second-chances, suicide-notes |
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3.7/5.0 - published Jan 10, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Dec 30, 2008 - 10 comments (preview)
A hot spring pool calls to a lonely, travel worn young woman in the frosty bitterness of winter.
Tags: hot-springs, winter |
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4.8/5.0 - published Dec 18, 2008 - 10 comments (preview)
A brief look into the strength and tenacity of one woman who never let medical hell stop her from being a blessing to those around her.
Tags: christmas, holidays, medical, true-story |
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4.1/5.0 - published Dec 04, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 22, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
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3.7/5.0 - published Nov 15, 2008 - 27 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Nov 14, 2008 - 23 comments (preview)
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