Discussion of "Were it not but for the wings" by Issy_LK

Guess it's my turn to comment back again...

Firstly, let me start by saying, thank you for what you said about my work, I was grateful - and have left a comment their, which no doubt you'll be reading. I also wanted to plug myself by saying, "please do read some of my short stories". I'd be very grateful for your words of un/kindness.

I have to say, I don't really know what to say about this; poetry isn't my strong point; but this was good. I can't really lay a finger on why it was good, or how it could be improved - which isn't really helpful, I know. It flowed, the rhetoric was beautiful and the message was nice.

So there you go, some very generic points. I'm sorry, I'm tired. I need some sleep. If you write some more, I'll read some more.

I will...until my skinny unpolished fingers cramp up in protest...and of course, I'm ecstatic to read more of your work- it seems fitting that short stories seem to be your genre over rhyming words;)