Discussion of "October chill:trite in true form............" by HuntsFamousWolf
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honeygloom 8 months ago
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Oh, just let us have a little fun. We know there are poor people and drug dealers. What do you like to do for fun my friend? |
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HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago
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fly fish |
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HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago
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fly fish |
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honeygloom 8 months ago
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Don't ever drown darling, I'd miss you, your misspellings, and non-sequiturs:) |
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HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago
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ouch my feelings |
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honeygloom 8 months ago
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Just messing with you:)I used to go fishing with my dad a lot when I was a kid. |
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HuntsFamousWolf 7 months, 4 weeks ago
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just kidding man |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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Sorry, I don't see the connection between this chapter(?) and the previous. |
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HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago
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it was a joke i was making fun that everyone was writing the same story.... |
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ShadowMan 8 months ago
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Wolf, the only requirement for a mash is that you somehow continue (however marginally) the thread of the chapter you are mashing. I think you come up with some interesting (and often obtuse) metaphors/prose, but you need to work some on your plot lines. I strongly suspect your method of writing is an affectation, and I sometimes wonder if you are messing with the rest of us (save your "friend" swamp) in every sense of the word. |
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HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago
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i am just messing with you |
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honeygloom 8 months ago
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I would hope so:) |
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HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago
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look up the word trite... |
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ShadowMan 8 months ago
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I have to disagree with the premise of your title. Although the various chapters stem from the same source material, they are unique. The objective of this little exercise was to examine the variety of work obtained by employing the writing styles of several writers, forced to apply their skills in a brickabrack fashion. There are only seven stories in the world, after all. We simply hang different dressings on them and call them original -- yourself included. Rather than simply voting your frustrations, why don't you comment with something constructive? Oh, and lose the "I'm an idjit" persona -- we're all writers here and personally I'd rather have your honest input than goofy circumlocutions. |
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HuntsFamousWolf 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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hahahahahahaaha |
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HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago
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also agreed |
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