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Discussion of "October chill:trite in true form............" by HuntsFamousWolf


2 honeygloom 8 months ago Reply

Oh, just let us have a little fun. We know there are poor people and drug dealers. What do you like to do for fun my friend?


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1 HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago Reply

fly fish


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1 HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago Reply

fly fish


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2 honeygloom 8 months ago Reply

Don't ever drown darling, I'd miss you, your misspellings, and non-sequiturs:)
It's hard to believe though that you find fly fishing more entertaining than Hemmingway (or yours truly for that matter)...


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1 HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago Reply

ouch my feelings


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1 honeygloom 8 months ago Reply

Just messing with you:)I used to go fishing with my dad a lot when I was a kid.


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1 HuntsFamousWolf 7 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

just kidding man


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2 writerwannabe 8 months ago Reply

Sorry, I don't see the connection between this chapter(?) and the previous.


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2 HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago Reply

it was a joke i was making fun that everyone was writing the same story....


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2 ShadowMan 8 months ago Reply

Wolf, the only requirement for a mash is that you somehow continue (however marginally) the thread of the chapter you are mashing. I think you come up with some interesting (and often obtuse) metaphors/prose, but you need to work some on your plot lines. I strongly suspect your method of writing is an affectation, and I sometimes wonder if you are messing with the rest of us (save your "friend" swamp) in every sense of the word.


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1 HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago Reply

i am just messing with you


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1 honeygloom 8 months ago Reply

I would hope so:)


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1 HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago Reply

look up the word trite...


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1 ShadowMan 8 months ago Reply

I have to disagree with the premise of your title. Although the various chapters stem from the same source material, they are unique. The objective of this little exercise was to examine the variety of work obtained by employing the writing styles of several writers, forced to apply their skills in a brickabrack fashion. There are only seven stories in the world, after all. We simply hang different dressings on them and call them original -- yourself included. Rather than simply voting your frustrations, why don't you comment with something constructive? Oh, and lose the "I'm an idjit" persona -- we're all writers here and personally I'd rather have your honest input than goofy circumlocutions.


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1 HuntsFamousWolf 7 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

hahahahahahaaha


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2 HuntsFamousWolf 8 months ago Reply

also agreed


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