Discussion of "the incomprehensible language of wine.." by HuntsFamousWolf

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Well there is certainly some truth in advertising here. The narrative appears disjointed at first blush, but there is a tenuous thread of consistency woven through it which makes it work for me. The Poe tie-in was apt. One problem I see is there are so many spelling errors it detracts from the readability of the piece; same for the varied fonts and underlining. Also, I would have liked there to have been some conclusion at the end to make this more of a story, rather than a mad soliloquy -- but that's just to keep it in the context of the site, not really a criticism. I gave it a 3. Interesting style!