yes but it will you be riddle see if you get it

it stains blue comes in the fall after the leaves
before the cold frost comes

i often come to this place and am so disappionted about the fantaSY. ILLUSION THAT TAKES PLACE here and everywhere.. their is so much in the world and i am sure around you it was a good writing. as most of your writing is... but where reality wheres you.

this was deep, hopefully not real. i dident know where to go after it.. I love your writing.. thou i ve been gone for awhile... almost completed a complete book.. the story of which you read here in the begginning. a collection of poems... Im back i aint leavin ready to incite a revoltion here in writing

i like thje poem til the ending

very good and reflective blakian

still humping the american dream

like this poem it a idea i have been working with..peoms are really a subcoinsense structure.. and writing to.

i know how to spell i often miss my mistakes tho

your a good writer i would like to give you some advice{my advice} when something seems made up you can tell so. in the begging was so much action and you dont know whats going on.. its good but i would like to say write about your own life what is around you...

i was unsure in the beggining slightly disagreeing i would have wrote something kins give you a okay score but i gave you a 5.. we should here start a brotherhood