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Hudson1

Date Joined: Aug. 11, 2010
Last Login: June 20, 2012

89 Comments by Hudson1

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1 Hudson1 2 years, 8 months ago Context

i liked your poem, not just because it was about alcoholism. would you consider this a prose poem? i'm trying to learn to write prose poetry and wondering if this is an example. let me know what you think


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1 Hudson1 2 years, 8 months ago Context

it's nice to hear something childlike and innocent in a world saturated with sex and violence(especially mindless television.) but sometimes, that garbage hits the spot, too!


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1 Hudson1 2 years, 11 months ago Context

thank you!


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1 Hudson1 2 years, 11 months ago Context

I don't either!


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1 Hudson1 2 years, 12 months ago Context

thanks. don't worry about rushing, i'm in my forties and i can still rush. the older you get, the more you can slow down. you can still have energy in your forties depending on if you exercise. as you get older, you won't rush your stories so much, but practice makes perfect. good luck!


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1 Hudson1 3 years ago Context

The funniest part about this is,"She was pretty for someone who was forty something," you must be quite young! i just recently turned 41, and feel pretty good for my age. I am rather fat, my hairline is receding rapidly, but more woman show interest in me now then in jr. high or high school, when i was extremely interested in women. Don't worry, aging is not that bad! i feel that you have a good gift of description. you know how to speak slow and give the details. i am always in too big of a rush to tell my story, as if i'm running out of time to do it. i don't know if you should continue the story, that is up to you. but i would never discourage a writer from writing. don't give up!


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1 Hudson1 3 years ago Context

Belongs in penthouse forum, or something like that! i liked the story, because sex is one of the greatest pleasures in life, but you finished the story showing what happens to marriages when people cheat. unfortuenately, this is too common of a thing nowadays. I'm single, and don't want to get married, but it is nice to see happy families every now and then. it would be nice if everything in the universe would work out just perfectly, like we could get sex when we wanted, or if we got married we could be happy, and our kids would turn out perfectly normal. but sounds like an "old wives tale" doesn't it?


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1 Hudson1 3 years ago Context

thanks. We all have to go through the same different ages, and it might be different for different generations. thanks for your feedback!


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1 Hudson1 3 years ago Context

Sorry, I've been busy. I haven't been to story mash in a long time. would you still like to see the horse print? maybe i'll e-mail it to you. my e-mail is elatedhudson@yahoo.com


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1 Hudson1 3 years ago Context

Sorry, I've been busy. I haven't been to story mash in a long time. would you still like to see the horse print? maybe i'll e-mail it to you. my e-mail is elatedhudson@yahoo.com


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