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Discussion of "October Chill: Feasting From Afar (6)" by Houlgrave


1 writerwannabe 6 months ago Reply

It's great seeing you back. I thought we'd lost you...lol. Superb! Simply superb!


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1 writerwannabe 6 months ago Reply

BTW...I think that you are at bat for "The Message", "Door to Door Evangelist" and "One to Remember" storylines. You kicked this one off. Are you filling in for Shadow?


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1 Psycho1_77 6 months ago Reply

Actually, Raven is filling in for Shadow... glad you made it back Derek, but wrong story...lol...


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1 writerwannabe 6 months ago Reply

Yeah, I know that Raven is filling in for Shadow and she did that with "Devil's Night (4)" but Shadow was up for "Feasting From Afar (6)" which Houl did....ergo, my question. Hey, it do get a mite confussin' sometime! lol


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1 Houlgrave 6 months ago Reply

Meh, I know I started it off...but did Raven give any indication she would show up for this at all?


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1 dogdeity11 6 months ago Reply

yep, she did. please check the graph to see which chapters you are up for. currently there are three.


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1 theblackhand 6 months ago Reply

I guess I will just sit back now and wait my turn, whenever that is. Thanks to all for cosidering me....


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1 honeygloom 6 months ago Reply

Well... Houl, YOU wrote a great chapter, I guess that's all that really matters. Fantastic idea too, Gareth hoarding Molotov cocktails. Great job!


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1 dogdeity11 4 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

Another really well written chapter Houlgrave. I love how you brought Gareths character back in to the storyline. And you clarified the age confusion between Peter and Treize.
Your dialogue is excellent. I would really like to see you work through a whole story. You have unique and creative ideas and a style that’s easy and fun to read.
I voted this chapter a 5.


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