Discussion of "Serial Killer" by HiddenCounter

Yeah, there are some problems and unless you request to hear them, I won't mention them. I don't feel like writting all that much down. Both other than that, I liked the premise. Interesting sort of who's who, what-the-hell concept. Leaves alot of things up in the air, I like that. I couldn't read any of the other stuff you had posted, it showed up blank. You should probably inform Katrina or another SM God, I'm sure they can fix it.

I would like to hear the problems if you have the time. I advocate both flaming and constructive criticisms.

It was difficult for me to follow the plot, however, the 2nd chapter helped make sense of things. I just hope this doesn't turn into another reality show. I could see the viewing audience voting on the best stories and ensuring someone else's demise.

Welcome to SM!

I like the premise, I think. I'm not sure because I don't know exactly what the premise is. I don't harp on grammar unless it's so bad that I can't read the story and here, it wasn't that bad but there are a lot of missing words and many of the sentences are "clunky".

I spent some time reading your comments. I do that to get a kind of mental image of the writer. It would seem to me that you are a smart guy, but a bit serious. Lighten up. Don't use quite so many "hard", "unusual", "formal" words in your writing. Let it flow and have fun with it and you'll see a great improvement.

You have some very good ideas, I believe and I'd like to read them...;o)

I find it kind of creepy how the ants are eating at that cat, Little babies burning up in fire. You are a Horror writer. Do you read a lot horror stories.