GarciaKSUH |
Date Joined: Dec. 9, 2008
Last Login: Dec. 16, 2008 |
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GarciaKSUH 4 years, 5 months ago
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http://storymash.com/u/GarciaKSUH/gobifire/ Hello all, I am just getting started on this site, and I would like some feedback on my first chapter. I just enjoy writing in my spare time, but I'd like to see what others think, so please look at the link above. Thanks! |
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2 Chapters by GarciaKSUH
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3.4/5.0 - published Dec 10, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Ted is confused and fearful of what he hears and doesn't hear from Becky on the phone. And it only gets worse when he's forced to battle his walking pneumonia.
Tags: becky, car-out-of-gas, phone-call, ted, walking-pneumonia |
