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Discussion of "My Angel" by Firebird197896


3 LadyAdelia 5 years, 9 months ago Reply

Beautiful!


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2 Firebird197896 5 years, 9 months ago Reply

Thank you for the comment. The inspiration for the poem is beautiful as well. Thank you for my first comment on Storymash.


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1 srvixen 5 years, 9 months ago Reply

I agree with the Lady, it is a beautiful poem, Brother, and I do hope that you will share it with the lucky angel that you have written about. Knowing her as I do, I am sure she will love it to no end.


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0 luke570 5 years, 9 months ago Reply

Nice poem. I hate it when people leave comments and don't leave specific comments or constructive critisism about the writing...

The thing is, there isn't much that comes to mind. All I can think of is that poems have CAPITALS at the start of every line, and usually have a comma at the end of a line.

Beautiful poem, and I'm assuming as LadyAdelia's comment was your first, you haven't been a member for long - so I look forward to reading some fresh new writing.


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