Discussion of "Remember" by FaeryQueen

"But it was wood, and wood had no heartbeat, just as the body that lay encased in it had none." The above is a really beautiful quotation and very appropriate when juxtaposed with the suffering of a mother. I am curious where you would take this. You have a very keen eye for description.

Very good. I can feel the emotions. Well written

See jerk, I told you people like your writing!