Discussion of "This Girl" by EphemeralExistence

Pretty and poetic. Well done. i would chide you a bit because this is supposed to be a 'mash' website where you start something that someone else can continue. Your poetic lament doesn't really allow for that.

I honestly didn't think it'd be a problem to continue off of this. I actually thought about turning this into some kind of prologue or something of the sort and write a short story about how the young man deals with his loss. Sorry, I guess I thought wrong!

Thanks for reading though, I really appreciate it.

I disagree about it not being able to be continued. I think you could easily either go back to the beginning and tell the tale leading up to this or to tell the story of him picking his life up slowly, healing, moving forward, finding new love, etc. Other than that though I agree with bamf. This was pretty and poetic. Well done, EphemeralExistence.

Thank you very much! ^^ I appreciate it!