It is more like a testimony an episodic reflection of client notes taken by the clinician. Expand it, develop the characters more. Get more adjectives and verbs going as well as a bit more dialogue. Good start . . .

You have given wonderful advice when it comes to struggling as an author or artist, of which I am both . . . " Focus your attentions on those that offer something productive and of value in their critisism"--Fabulous ! Turn away the negative constructive criticism if its really bad but do read it, it strengthens our attributes.
Thank you and have a great day !

Thats because no one knows we are here, but guess what I FOUND YOU ! We are friends at yahoo 360 and I know this is you from the vivid imagery you use in your stories ! Love this ! Just joined and you are my first contact . . .
hugs,
Erica (sojournseeker at yahoo)