Paulsifer42 1 year, 4 months ago
This is super solid. There's a piece of me that wants to give continuing it a shot, but I'm not sure if I'm qualified. For some reason, the girl in it seems very real, and as I've never been a girl, I really don't think I'd do her character justice. The guy seems super cool too, I think I could do it if it were in his eyes, but certainly not in hers. Please keep going though, I'm really interested in how this turns out.
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Jia 1 year, 4 months ago
To be honest,i loved your story.It had so much emotion! I could feel everything.The way you described the girl was very natural.You did a great job and i am looking forward to more stories! :)
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