Sorry life has gotten really busy and my computer crashed. Hope this works out really well for you guys.

Sounds good to me looking forward to getting started. October Chill is my vote. I know the author of that story and he would be very flattered to have us use it for this.

Sounds like fun might as well throw myself down the literary elevator shaft. Count me in!

I wrote it as a follow up to your story. I read your story and it just seemed to be something that needed to be written down. It was hard to write so thanks for liking it.

Great last line! I love the character interested to see what you will do next with him.

Creative idea! I really like the thought behind it. Just an idea might have caught more people though if you put a tiny bit more into it. Someone can take this anywhere but I think the problem will be is someone trying to figure out exactly where they want to take it.

Nicely done! I think all writers understand that idea of the brain seeming to shut down at night. A thousand things to say but no words to say them with, Is how I feel most the time. The small story is very nice; I like the ideas behind it. Soft and gentle and holds a lot of emotion.

I wanted to right a comment about this story yet the only thing I can say is that it is very well done completely emotional and disturbing all at once. My heart breaks for the little girl where at the same time I want to beat the father senseless. Once again well done!

I found the dark figure to interesting character maybe representing death, or the devoid complete lack of hope that the family feels. I could have used a cut funny animal or maybe lost of blood but other then that a great journey on human emotion. I fill as if I can die happy. Very, very existential

Yes that is part of the character! I know Picasso didn't paint the Mona Lisa but what he does to his victums is a little more Picasso then DaVinci