Discussion of "one dark night, squewed fork." by DwayneHoover
hebe6405 5 years, 2 months ago
...oh my... great follow up. The content of this has me totally creeped out and has actually left a sick feeling in my stomach. Very well done. Worthy of 5 stars - but for the few mistakes I saw "whole" vs "hole" and a some other grammar oopies which initially caught my attention.... actually, I'm gonna go back and give it the whole 5, 'cause the imagry is still so vivid.
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