Discussion of "Clovis First pt 12 (Revised edition)" by DwayneHoover

I saw the few changes and they just added to the story. It was great even witht he errors.

I dont think they hurt the story at all, it helped it tie in better. i'm still sad that angela is gone. but like all stories it must go on, right? good job, waiting in anticipation for the next chapter....

Another winner friend, I only felt snagged into reality a few times by minor flow issues but those stood in the shadow of an amazing story line and well crafted characters peaked with a static drama.

5 stars

i found if you paste it onto a microsoft word file you can spellcheck and them fix what you miss before you publish. I just recently started doing that, and it seems to help.