Discussion of "Strange Happenings" by Doveman
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WildGypsy 3 years, 9 months ago
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nice dialog between the characters! |
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honeygloom 3 years, 9 months ago
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Wow, that was good. Cohesive and you kept up both of the very distinct characters really well. The setting and scene were believable and Het's story kept me on the edge of my seat. Great job! |
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Doveman 3 years, 9 months ago
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Thanks for the comments. I got a second chapter in the works, hopefully I can get it up before the end of the week. |
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writerwannabe 3 years, 9 months ago
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Excellent writing, Doveman, really good! Very tight, believable dialogue, storyline, characterization...all excellent. 5 points! |
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Psycho1_77 3 years, 9 months ago
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Very nice, indeed... I will wait to see where any other chapters go, then maybe give a continuation a shot... 5 stars |
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Houlgrave 3 years, 9 months ago
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My God, this is great! Can't wait for the next chapter. Also, does anyone know if poems are allowed to be posted here? I just posted one up I finished recently, so... |
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oldtree 3 years, 9 months ago
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WOW! This is a great story. It kept me in suspense. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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theblackhand 3 years, 9 months ago
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Great story. 5 all the way..... |
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dfeiwus 3 years, 6 months ago
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Wow, great job! I really enjoyed reading this story. It flowed so smoothly and your characters were very well defined. Great work. I give you a 5! |
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