Thanks for understanding, dont get me wrong, I really liked your story, thats why I got the idea to continue from another view, Without a good start, one can not continue or expand. (lol and you know without a catchy title no one will want to see what the storys about!)

Understood, its no problem (coincidentally this sites about storymash, which is putting different aspects to a story or adding)so I didn't know you might take it like that, cus who knows, one day I could put something down and you might add your point too without trying to offend me, but it might seem that way...thank goodness its all fiction, nothing more. turn a :( upside down :)

My friend, don't take it too personal, you wrote it from your point of view, and I wrote it on mine. Lets be adults here ok.

thanks blackhand, i'll do that

Very good chapter!

A little different from the norm, gets you to think too, enjoy!

If I entered my story on the last day on the deadline, would it be considered in the next contest or would I have to write a new one?