I got your email! Thanks so much, I guess I didn't think too much about the editing. But I appreciate your comments and really liked them because now I know if I write something good and if you say it's good as a hard critic, then I know it's great! lol I'm going to take your advice, write something new, but I don't want to write a true story, but I'll make sure this will have you highlight something in bold! And I used to hate english so yea, I do have a lot of catching up to do, but its worth it! I'm going to send you a new paper today, so check your email within the hour.

And thank you so much for helping me out! I really need it.

Thanks for the advice, I'll make some corrections.

This is so epic and good! I was enthralled all the way, I kind of love this lol I'm going to keep reading, very nice read. I loved how you described everything in detail, it was beautiful.

Lmao we're bestfriends. We signed up for story mash at the same time, but she gave you her email lol idk why, but I really want to be a great writer and I figure if you have some experience or whatever, then you can school me or something, but here's my email: howlersworld@yahoo.com

List your favorite books and authors and explain why or how those books/ authors influence your writing.

For example, I think when I read a lot of fantasy or even movies like Tolkien's Lord of The Rings, I wanted to create this world of life, unknown. Similar to a friends story, I think she really creates that fantasy, or at least the start of it.

http://storymash.com/u/creativewriter/sowidami/

Hey everyone!
I'm looking for a story like this: http://storymash.com/u/creativewriter/sowidami/

It has adventure or fantasy! Post your stories if its anything like the one above. Thanks =)

What kind of project is this? Sounds interesting.

Hey everyone, I was thinking, lets come up with one great idea and keep adding to it! lol By the way, if anyone cares or is wondering, I'm a new comer! so HI and check out this story, it's written by some body, but I think its good. =)

http://storymash.com/u/creativewriter/sowidami/

lol... I feel kind of morbid since I just wrote a paranormal:

http://storymash.com/u/Deedestinee/taponagu/

haha... but its not that dark either. I say Mysterious?

Hey, check out my new story, by the way, I'm a new comer, hey! It's a preface of something GREAT! lol its a paranormal, six sense kind of story, but I think a lot of people will enjoy it. It's not too scary or too on the soft side. Very MYSTERIOUS. =) ENJOY!
http://storymash.com/u/Deedestinee/taponagu/