I live in Arizona, so here, 78 may as well be snowing lol

Damn, and please forgive my typos, just woke up and moving today, so typing slightly hectic so as not to slow the process once the U-Haul gets here.

lol

Wow, doe you all like in igloo's or something? 78 is room temperature... (just kidding, but it is room temp). lol

Well written piece, though I do agree with EA, it doesn't advance the story much, though the introduction of a questionable gardener and that it may have been the stalker/murderer that paid for her things. 4 stars only however as some of the spelling and grammatical errors made it slightly difficult to get through.

All in all, well done. 4 stars and three cheers. Welcome to SM.

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If I thought this were an honest entry wanting for votes I ould have given it 5 stars for the fact that I couldn't stop laughing for quite some time. I've never before had the pleasure of reading a POV war, that was some exquisite writing.

No vote officially, 5 stars for comic relief.

While the storyline here is intriging, I hope that there are plans to explain a little more regarding the cultural differences in order to show that not all people of a culture feel the same way. It's a very thin line when dealing with cultural stereotypes, with a large possibility that someone from one culture or the other may find the written word offensive. I am very curious to see where this is headed.

The funny thing here Nash, is that Jade is my fiance and you and I gave her the same advice for this chapter. More detailed characters. You have much better advising methods than do I however, this post helps me also (you're helping me get A's in my English Composition class).

always good to keep the reader guessing, makes them want more lol

also... you sure it was an arrow? ;P

thanks... love fantasy and sci-fi, just not sure where I wanted this one to go, hadn't thought it through so hoping for some follow-ups to help my process...