Discussion of "Enchanted Pages" by Daria76
dkk4510 5 years, 1 month ago
I few puncuation and tense errors, that's all I really found. Good story, I would like a little more back ground though. Good job, watch your words.
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zatoichi 5 years, 1 month ago
You have got to watch tense and conjugation while you're writing. Overall, it is a very good story with a good premise and hook. The problem is that the errors take attention away from the actual story. Just watch yourself and read your work out loud when you're done to make sure it is what you want to say.
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