Dude, your boy is going nuts. It's good, very detailed in regards to obsession. I'm not very experienced with poetic psycho drama outside the realm of Stephen King, but you've made me realize I'm not as crazy as I sometimes feel! Thanks for the read and good luck!

Thanks Sai Sim, I'm really glad you dug my addition. I think you stirred the pot very well by introducing an additional character that wasn't in Mr. Nameless' family, and by changing the scene to NC instead of CO. I'm from NC and have water skiied along Lake Norman, so it helped me feel a bit of nastalgia as well. Also, Its cool you dug Harold's accent. Having lived there, I can tell you, it's not an exageration, people actually sound like that. But don't confuse it with ignorance. He's not stupid, at least not in my mind. Anyway, thanks again for your comments! By the way, the pot reference was just a joke, but It would explain his memory loss, don't you think? Too bad the contest is over or we might find out.