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October Chill one to remember (2)  by DTJedi

 Dreamless sleep could I be so fortunate, to lie motionless and thinkof nothing,dream of nothing. I closed my eyes and did drift off to sleep, sleep at long last. I woke as twilight broke the plane of my curtains bounceing off of my damned white walls illuminating the cobwebs that blanketed the corners of my livingroom.

"Paxil sweet Paxil mistress that gives me sanity." I spoke to myself. I wandered the once vibrant hallway of my vacent home and finally found the will to eat. In my fridge I found a long forgoten sandwich that was painted with mold and needed to be tossed out, milk that had long passed it expiration date. My home had been far too long neglected since Elizabeth and the girls were gone. I opened the freezer to find a box of Chloe's ice pops still waited for her icepops that would never be tasted by my little chereb again.

I was pulled from the meloncoly daze I was in by Buzz's high pitched barking and a barely audible knocking at my door. I opened it to find and unfamiliar face, a sweet blue eyed girl that looked so very much like my Chloe.

"Hello sweety can I help you with something?"

"I am Jayme my mommy said I should give these to you as a Hello present."

 She handed me a small basket with assorted fruits and cookies. Along with a card with a family picture in it There were only two people in the portrait Jayme with her blonde hair fashioned in curls that framed her face and made her porcelin skin seem to glow and whom I can only assume to be her mother. She had the same glowing skin and blonde hair the only thing setting the two apart was her mothers dark green eyes.

"That was very nice of your mother Jayme was it. I should walk you home and thank your mother in person."

Jayme skipped merrily along side of me, god how she reminded me of my Chloe. I was met at the end of the cobble stone walk way by a tall slender blonde.

"Thank you for walking her home I worry so much about her walking alone but she was  very insistant on greating our closest neighbor. I hope you like the cookies." She said shy and tenative. " did she catch you at a bad time?" she asked finally takeing note of the fact that he was in his pajamas and his hair was deshevled.

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Date created: May 23, 2008
Date published: May 23, 2008
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