sorry ment to say well written accidentally put well writting. sorry.

wow this is intence I love it. Very well done, well writting I could actually feel the conflict.

fantastic story thus far I loved it

you are so right.

my friend read it and hated the jumping around.

Thank you I appreshiate the input I have several things that I am working on and I heard about this site. My spelling and grammer are both horrible as you can see. But that is what I get for not owning a dictionary, and my word or should I say my computer that has word in it is down and this crappy lap top cannot handle the burdon. I am happy you like the story line it was my first shot at scifi type writings.

I am a first timer and I have got to say that this communtiy writting thing is pretty frigging cool. I really like the fact that you are so free to imput into other stories.