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Discussion of "Platitudinous Fog" by DGrimes

1 DGrimes 7 years, 1 month ago Reply

I published this one so early because I actually wrote it several years ago. I hope you can all relate to some of its content and I believe everyone will take from this their own interpretations as it has a special significance to me that others wouldn't understand. That said, enjoy.

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1 dogdeity11 7 years, 1 month ago Reply

Hey DGrimes~ So this was interesting to me. From the title to the first paragraph where you explain that it isn’t a metaphor but a real fork in the road situation. Then it continues on as if it were in fact the exact metaphor you said it wasn’t. And I loved that. I wasn’t sure if I should be contemplating deeply about life or just tightening my laces for whatever journey was to come.
Full of the advertised triteness, yet still captivating and thought provoking.
Great job.

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1 DGrimes 7 years, 1 month ago Reply

thanks dog. I am glad that this has meant something to someone. Its not really mashable, but I think I can get away with that. Again, thanks for support

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1 yur1 7 years ago Reply

Hey, cool stuff. A modern day Pilgrims Progress! The dilemmas of straight, left or right could have been further embelished at each mention.

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