http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rD_v2tmihao&feature=youtube_gdata_player

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rD_v2tmihao&feature=youtube_gdata_player

Great chapter Alharris. It left me satisfied and sad to see it over. While we never got to learn what picture made his mother cry so, I think it is better left a mystery and I'm glad that you recognized that.

This one is going to straight to publishing as well because it is actually co-written. (Equal credit goes to Derrick Lee) I am no longer in touch with him, therefore, when I encountered grammatical errors while writing the draft, I was reluctant to change anything without consulting Derrick, which I can not do at this time.

I like the idea, but there are many spelling errors and grammatical problems that are of some concern. Overall, that made it difficult to understand and I really wish you would have kept this one in draft form.

alharris, your style is amazing to me. I am quickly becoming a fan because its obvious to me that you know what your doing. You can put together a sentence, establish plot, characters and storyline, then most importantly, you deliver. A lot of people just don't understand that just because nothing is immediately happening in the story, that doesn't mean it sucks. I demand more of this piece.

Though I think you have enough compliments, I suppose you deserve one more, your story was very good and took a direction I can't say I expected after Honeyglooms start, but it great to see where you went with it! I am engulfed in this new plot and hope to see it continued furthur.

I would like feedback on my continuation of Bazooko's million dollar fatman story. Please read part three, also, should I just publish continuations as new stories so they will get publicity better? So long as everyone knows what continuation it is?

part three of the million dollar fat man is posted. Anyone interested?

thanks dog. I am glad that this has meant something to someone. Its not really mashable, but I think I can get away with that. Again, thanks for support