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Discussion of "The Embryo" by Cynthus


2 honeygloom 5 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

How sweet and sad, and such a turn around from the bleak chapter ahead of it... Very nice writing.


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1 Cynthus 5 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Thank you honeygloom. I could see where the first part was going. I felt that womanhood should not be such a rebuke. Yes, we cry.

Sometimes it is happy cry and sometimes it is sad cry.


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1 thamagnopen 5 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

I too loved where you went with the story Cynthus!
I too agree my first part was Bleak but we all know quite true.......
"Lets keep it real"


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1 Cynthus 5 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

Thanks thamagnopen...

Well, I don't believe life is that bleak. Even though life is about bumps. I know this because I have have had some great successes (graduating at the top of my college class) and defeats (diagnosed with Wegener's Granulomatosis). It is what you do with life that makes it happy or bleak. Or how a character or person reacts to conflict. :-)

Yours, Cyn


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1 thamagnopen 5 months, 1 week ago Reply

well said Cyn, Well Said....
I can feel the good person in you.
God Bless


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