Discussion of "Apology" by Cornelius

nicely written! I especially enjoyed this:
For tho we know the hour of the setting Sun
Dying awaits tomorrow or beyond
For our bodies
for the garden
for the old tree
And in this fleeting flash of light we call life,
I must truly live.

Thank you, DogDiety!

You had me to the very end... Personally, I don't see the purpose of an "all encompasing apology." I've had past friends and relations say such as "I don't know what I did, but I'm sorry." To me, you can't apologize unless you know what you've done wrong - else you can't fix it for the future.

But that has nothing to do with the quality of the writing; just a personal reflection and reaction to a very well written piece of poetry. It was lovely and I scored it high ;)

Thanks hebe for reading it and for your thoughts and the high score! It is very specifically about gushing over someone who is likely not interested. It is actually a romantic love poem.

Whats with the poems all of a sudden? Well good job on this as well lol.

I posted a draft of the story I asked you to collabo on.

It is called "The Picture Frame."

I am going to add more to it this week, so do not continue it .just yet.

'The Picture Frame' is almost finished.

The 1st chapter for TPF is complete.

this was good mate oh and btw ill be adding more poems soon

Beautiful. Nice work