Discussion of "Apology" by Cornelius
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dogdeity11 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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nicely written! I especially enjoyed this: |
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Cornelius 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Thank you, DogDiety! |
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hebe6405 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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You had me to the very end... Personally, I don't see the purpose of an "all encompasing apology." I've had past friends and relations say such as "I don't know what I did, but I'm sorry." To me, you can't apologize unless you know what you've done wrong - else you can't fix it for the future. But that has nothing to do with the quality of the writing; just a personal reflection and reaction to a very well written piece of poetry. It was lovely and I scored it high ;) |
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Cornelius 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Thanks hebe for reading it and for your thoughts and the high score! It is very specifically about gushing over someone who is likely not interested. It is actually a romantic love poem. |
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rocklee11416 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Whats with the poems all of a sudden? Well good job on this as well lol. |
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theblackhand 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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I posted a draft of the story I asked you to collabo on. It is called "The Picture Frame." I am going to add more to it this week, so do not continue it .just yet. |
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theblackhand 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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'The Picture Frame' is almost finished. |
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theblackhand 1 month, 1 week ago
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The 1st chapter for TPF is complete. |
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Althorian 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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this was good mate oh and btw ill be adding more poems soon |
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