Discussion of "Harvest ( 3 ) Six Legged Beast" by Cornelius

Awesome awesomeness!! Great follow up and great writing. The character development you've done with the Doddards turns this tale to horror for me. Great job!

Oh, thank you honeygloom! I wasn't sure I got the horror in there. I was thinking of those creepy hillbilly families like in Texas Chainsaw, but didn't want to be too cliche. I hope I stepped away from the mold and am very pleased indeed that you enjoyed it!

I thought your dialoge matched the previous chapter fairly well, but somehow I just couldn't get into the fighting and running scene, I just don't know why.

I like this too. But in the chapter before this it was mentioned the brothers but later said Billy Ray had no kin.