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Day 7  by Cordeliaf9t

It was 7 in the morning when the phone rang. Dan answered. It was Oscar. He said that he had caught the murderer in his house. He told Dan not to call the police. Dan put on his clothes and ran to Oscar’s house. Nobody answered when he knocked on the door. He entered the house and suddenly saw Oscar. He was tied. He was trying to say something. When Dan hurried to release him someone hit Dan’s head and he lost his consciousness.  

   Jess was waiting for Dan’s call. She decided to phone Ted and Sue. Ted answered the phone.

  Jess: “Hi Ted. How are you? How is Sue?”

  Dan: “Oh. Hi Jess. I was sleeping and Sue….Jess………Sue is not here”.

  Jess “What? Hallo?”

Suddenly the lights were turned off. Jess saw someone approaching her. It was………………………SUE.  

   Jess: “You? But………..

   Sue: “Shut up. I know that you have lots of questions. First of all let me introduce myself to you. Hi. I am Terry Smith”.

  Jess: “Terry Smith? Oh my God. You are…...

  Sue: “Yeah. Your little and cute sister. But you and your mother forgot about me like about a toy”.

  Jess: “We didn’t forget you. We were trying to find you for so many years. But I can’t believe. Did you kill these people? Why?”

  Sue: “Why? You ask me why? You won’t understand me. You were a real angel in all your life. Everyone liked you. And nobody loved me. Mother even gave all her gold and expensive things to you. Nothing to me. Did you like the mirror? Poor Tina….And what about Predy?”

  Jess: “You are just crazy”. 

  Sue: “It was so funny when I forced Oscar to phone Dan. Oh. And your sweet neighbor. I really loved him. But he loved you as everybody does”.

 Jess:“WhereisDan?”                                                                Sue: “Listen Jess. I’ve got a surprise for you. You know that your mother didn’t have problems with her heart. Yes-yes. I did it”.

Jess: “You killed our mother? You’re a monster. You are not my sister. You don’t deserve to be a human being. Devil….."                                Tears began falling from Jessica's  eyes.She was lost......lost in the darkness of this cruel world. 

Suddenly Ted entered. He was trying to hit Sue when she shot at him and Ted fell down. 

Sue was trying to shoot at Jess when Dan came. He hit Sue.She was trying to take the gun again.Dan hit her again and took the gun.

Dan:"Never thought that hitting a girl can be such a pleasure".

Suddenly the police entered and arrested Sue. The police officer said that Dan and Jess would have to go to the police station and went out.                                               

Dan: “I don’t know what to say. I am shocked too”.                                            

 Jess: “Dan! You were in time as usual. Thanks God I have you in my life.I hope this time you have called the police”.                  

Dan: “No. I haven’t”.                                                         Jess: “What?”                                              Suddenly someone caught Dan’s foot..... It was …..Ted. He was alive.                                                                                       Ted: “I have called the police”.

 

 

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Date created: July 6, 2010
Date published: July 6, 2010
Comments: 1
Tags: dead, friend, horror, love, murderer, mystery, romance, trust
Word Count: 2223
Times Read: 88
Story Length: 2
Children Rank: 2.9/5.0 (1 votes)