Discussion of "When Bad Things Taste Good-Chapter 4" by Cheeseliker

Nice continuation. I fond it comical (not sure if that's what this story is). Well I don't think Eddie would even consider killing him...I see him as more of a man that killed and didn't care...like he HAD to kill otherwise he wouldn't waste his time. I like the ending leaves room for someone to follow up with the 11 "thing" and I have the perfect idea to do so unless anyone else wants to jump in? Overall GREAT!!

Well, I think Eddie would've found his situation comical, thus why he was laughing or smiling, even when things looked grim. I figure he's got kind of a ****-it-all kind of attitude at the moment anyways.

thanks for the comment and thoughts by the way.

Ok, so you beat me to it. I guess I'll write the next chapter. Anyway...not a bad continuation. I actually like the way it ended. It makes it easier for me to continue.

Great job carrying on the theme Cheese! You guys, (all writers included), have managed to bring this character to life with a brutality I’m not sure I am capable of creating. I’m enjoying it!