Discussion of "Discovery: Hesitation" by Cheeseliker

2		wolfram 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply I could have just told you I liked this story, and the way you're moving it forward, but instead I mashed on it. Nice work!
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1		writerwannabe 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply Man, I'm really glad you brought this one back to life, cheese!! Great chapter. Let me see what wolfram did and then, I'm back in on this one!!
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1		hebe6405 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply Very suspenseful. Nice continuation of the story... There were a couple of typos, but I was too entranced in the reading to mark where I'd seen them ;) Nice work.
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