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Discussion of "The Pledge - 6" by Cheeseliker


2 Aggeloi 2 years, 9 months ago Reply

Good continuation. I like that the hissing sound turned out to be a real threat and not just the product of a frightened mind, and I enjoyed the glimpse of what exactly a razor wraith is. Nicely played!


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2 nashvillebecker 2 years, 9 months ago Reply

You suck.

Thank you for running in boots, introducing what I'm guessing is the Council, and emphasizing the edge in pledge. Though the redness and darkness make it hard to find a sunset to ride into, I like where this could go. Moreover, I like where you drove it. Welcome back.


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2 crystalfoo 2 years, 9 months ago Reply

Hallelujah. Let me pour a glass of wine with my Cheese.

Most excellent.

Good to see you again, and I second the welcome back. =)


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