Discussion of "October Chill: A Halloween to Remember" by Cheeseliker

Ok, talk about a life coach from Hell. This is a very interesting start. Is the preacher kidnapping the girl so John will get off his duff and do something? I guess we'll find out. Great start:)

Another unusual twist and great leave for the next writer to continue. Great writing, Cheeseliker! I think I'll refrain from voting, everyone is getting fives. LOL...naw, but I'll only announce my vote if it's something less than five, how's that?

go to the graph thread by dogdiety11

FANTASTIC!
I love the interaction on the phone. pretty unexpected. and the end was perfect!
Great chapter cheese.

Go to: Graph (draft) by dogdeity11

this has the full layout for the story

He forgot the candy bowl...
That part killed me and set the whole thing up. Just a few seconds and we're off on a whole different slant. Great job!

Great start... just rying to fiure out how I should follow this up... You all know how I like to twist and turn through a tale, so I think I may get a start on this and then take some time to reall, reall think about where to go with it...

Excellent mash, Cheeseliker. The phone call was a good touch - after the van arrived so quickly I suddenly had a vision of the devil himself having a cell phone. Lots of ways to go with this one!

YOUR NEXT CHAPTER IS DUE TOMORROW

I read this a few days ago. I like what you guys are doing here. You have talent cheese. You make stories come to life. Hopefully one day we will collabo....