Another addition to CoC.

Check out the announcements forum, for the continued(not new) thread, lots of good storylines and such there, along with authors who are interested in MASHing other chapters, instead of starting new ones.

I hope you don't mind.

Yes.

Another thing I forgot to mention, I like how the woman has been led along so far, but is now beginning to take the lead, perhaps not to exact her total revenge, but she'll probably need to build up to that.

This story just gets crazier and crazier. As Nash said, the story gets more and more confusing to the reader as it goes on, but in a good way. I look forward to seeing just how Ducky will assist.

Interesting. Further down the rabbit hole...You present a good set-up for conflict here, and a likable character in the maid. Also more evidence to support the fact that John Hughes is an **** who deserves his comeuppance.

Well, I wasn't sure how long to make the chapter, and I had an idea about Ducky, so guess I should've just bit the bullet and made it longer. I look forward to how this proceeds, at long last, this woman will finally stop being passed around like a hot potato.

I know what you mean, Nash has also thought a flag of some sorts would be very useful. If nobody else does, maybe one of you two will continue this?

I accepted your dare.