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Cheeseliker

Real Name: Ben Adams
Date Joined: Nov. 28, 2007
Last Login: Oct. 8, 2008

290 Comments by Cheeseliker

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1 Cheeseliker 1 day, 8 hours ago Context

Another addition to CoC.


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1 Cheeseliker 1 day, 15 hours ago Context

Check out the announcements forum, for the continued(not new) thread, lots of good storylines and such there, along with authors who are interested in MASHing other chapters, instead of starting new ones.


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1 Cheeseliker 1 day, 15 hours ago Context

I hope you don't mind.


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1 Cheeseliker 1 day, 15 hours ago Context

Yes.


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1 Cheeseliker 2 days, 6 hours ago Context

Another thing I forgot to mention, I like how the woman has been led along so far, but is now beginning to take the lead, perhaps not to exact her total revenge, but she'll probably need to build up to that.


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1 Cheeseliker 2 days, 6 hours ago Context

This story just gets crazier and crazier. As Nash said, the story gets more and more confusing to the reader as it goes on, but in a good way. I look forward to seeing just how Ducky will assist.


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1 Cheeseliker 2 days, 6 hours ago Context

Interesting. Further down the rabbit hole...You present a good set-up for conflict here, and a likable character in the maid. Also more evidence to support the fact that John Hughes is an **** who deserves his comeuppance.


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1 Cheeseliker 2 days, 14 hours ago Context

Well, I wasn't sure how long to make the chapter, and I had an idea about Ducky, so guess I should've just bit the bullet and made it longer. I look forward to how this proceeds, at long last, this woman will finally stop being passed around like a hot potato.


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1 Cheeseliker 4 days, 2 hours ago Context

I know what you mean, Nash has also thought a flag of some sorts would be very useful. If nobody else does, maybe one of you two will continue this?


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2 Cheeseliker 4 days, 9 hours ago Context

I accepted your dare.


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40 Chapters by Cheeseliker

A woman takes some pictures and nearly gets hurt.
Tags: fiction, mystery, rape, revenge, vengeance
A woman trying to get revenge learns from the best, cons on call.
Tags: justice, mystery, revenge
Someone isn't too pleased about the robbery.
Tags: mystery, robbery
Kidnapping and torture, but is there hope?
Tags: adventure, fiction, kidnapping, murder, mystery, torture
A young college kid tries to find a kidnapper, meanwhile kidnapper deals with his victim.
Tags: horror, kidnap, kidnapping, mystery
Apple picking antics lead to something disturbing.
Tags: childhood, horror, murder, mystery
The strange journey of a demented murderer.
Tags: gore, horror, murder, mystery
Tags: adventure, epic, horror
An addition to my horror story. Please comment and critizise.
Tags: horror, mystery
Tags: horror, supernatural, werewolves
Continuation of what I hope to be my horror story submission.
Tags: horror, mystery
The beginning to what may be a story I submit for the horror story project. Please give me your thoughts and comments.
Tags: horror, mystery
A strange night of druidic powers, an evil demon of a man, and a struggle between good and evil...sort of.
A man finds a troubling message in his house.
A lonely man finds out he's about to be tested on Halloween.
It's over for a tortured man.
A man wants closure from his ex in the worst way.
A detective gets on Bonny and Clyde's tail.
The night gets stranger.
A college students friday night seems incredibly boring, but seems about to change.
A revised version of my first chapter I wrote. I realize now I should not have been so quick to publish it. I got rid of the swears and the grammatical errors that I saw. Please, any and all comments are appreciated.