Cheeseliker |
Real Name: Ben Adams
Date Joined: Nov. 28, 2007 Last Login: March 17, 2013 |
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714 Comments by Cheeseliker
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Cheeseliker 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Miss this place. Miss you fellow writers. Hope all is well. That is all. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 1 month ago
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Alright, now that I have some time, here's what I'm going to say. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 1 month ago
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Right now, I only have the time to say this was absolutely amazing, perfect, fantastic, fabulous, the best chapter out of the entire series. I will take some time to say more when I can. You blew it out of the park Wolfram. That was an awesome read. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 1 month ago
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This first bit has me laughing and loving it. Holy cow Wolfram...but I'll save the rest of my comments for the end. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 1 month ago
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Man, this is a great classic detective fiction starter. Love it. So many clues, suspects, a good ol boy detective whose seen it all, grizzled and chubby. Awesome. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 2 months ago
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Hey JD, Really liked your chapter. Really sets the beginning well. What we really need is someone to go for chapter 3, then they can decide which chapter they wish to follow. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 2 months ago
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Go check out my thread in the Projects forum and sign on to write a chapter to one of the projects. You will be adding your work to the work of some of the best writers on the site, not to mention participating in some of the coolest story lines. Oldies, newbies, come one, come all, help finish these stories that have some fantastic chapters, all they need are few more to finish up. http://storymash.com/f/projects-and-contests/1031/#c_42090 |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 2 months ago
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A great start so far! New chapters added to SUDS and Around the World! And it seems Nash may be taking on chapter 3 or 5 of Project Zorro. He says 5 in his comment, but the next chapter up is 3, so hopefully thats the one he's taking on. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 2 months ago
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I'll take the last spot. Not sure if I'll attempt a starter chapter or not, but I will decide and send you one before 3/17, if I decide to do so. |
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Cheeseliker 1 year, 2 months ago
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Haha, great continuation! The reveal of the monster/killer is great at the end, a nice cliff-hanger for the next chapter. You added just enough for the fourth chapter, leaving enough to be told in the last two chapters. I really like this cute little story. |
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70 Chapters by Cheeseliker
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 11, 2012 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Feb 07, 2012 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Jan 30, 2012 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Oct 31, 2010 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
The Reality of being an All-Knowing All-powerful wizened wizard.
Tags: adventure, farmer, magic, necromancy, wizard |
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4.3/5.0 - published Oct 11, 2010 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.7/5.0 - published Oct 04, 2010 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Nov 07, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Oct 19, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published May 01, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.9/5.0 - published May 13, 2009 - 16 comments (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Mar 27, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
The Hunter's Hunted meets the Homunculous Bies and things happen.
Tags: horror, monsters, pennydreadful, project, werespider, werewolves |
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4.2/5.0 - published May 01, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
There is more to George VanTessel's acquaintance, Frank Critzer, then meets the eye
Tags: electromagnetic, fields, sci-fi, science-fiction, supernatural, ufo |
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 17, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Feb 17, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Feb 16, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
An end to this tale, but who knows?
Tags: fantasy |
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3.7/5.0 - published Feb 13, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Feb 12, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Jun 03, 2009 - 7 comments (preview)
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3.1/5.0 - published Jan 05, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.8/5.0 - published Feb 03, 2009 - 5 comments (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Dec 04, 2008 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Nov 27, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Oct 27, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
A man down on his luck finds something in the last place he'd ever look.
Tags: mystery |
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"Stepping Upon Universe-Balancing-Highly-Concentrated-Super-Powered Entities Is Considered Bad Form" by Cheeseliker
4.2/5.0 - published Oct 22, 2008 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 21, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.7/5.0 - published Oct 16, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.7/5.0 - published Oct 11, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Oct 04, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.7/5.0 - published Sep 24, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
A young college kid tries to find a kidnapper, meanwhile kidnapper deals with his victim.
Tags: horror, kidnap, kidnapping, mystery |
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3.7/5.0 - published Sep 21, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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2.7/5.0 - published Sep 18, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 17, 2008 - 15 comments (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 15, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Sep 15, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 15, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story (preview tags)
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3.7/5.0 - published Aug 27, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Aug 22, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview tags)
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3.8/5.0 - published Aug 18, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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3.1/5.0 - published Aug 17, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Aug 17, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Jun 19, 2008 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
A strange night of druidic powers, an evil demon of a man, and a struggle between good and evil...sort of.
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4.0/5.0 - published May 28, 2008 - 6 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published May 21, 2008 - 6 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published May 14, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published May 06, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
A man finds a troubling message in his house.
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4.2/5.0 - published Apr 27, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
A lonely man finds out he's about to be tested on Halloween.
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4.0/5.0 - published Apr 23, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
It's over for a tortured man.
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3.0/5.0 - published Apr 22, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
A man wants closure from his ex in the worst way.
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 19, 2008 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
A detective gets on Bonny and Clyde's tail.
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4.6/5.0 - published Apr 16, 2008 - 9 comments (preview)
A college students friday night seems incredibly boring, but seems about to change.
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4.0/5.0 - published Apr 14, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Apr 11, 2008 - 9 comments
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4.3/5.0 - published Apr 09, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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3.4/5.0 - published Apr 09, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Apr 09, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.4/5.0 - published Apr 09, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Apr 09, 2008 - no comments
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2.9/5.0 - published Apr 07, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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2.9/5.0 - published Dec 19, 2007 - no comments - start of story
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3.2/5.0 - published Dec 12, 2007 - 1 comment
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2.9/5.0 - published Dec 03, 2007 - no comments - start of story
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3.2/5.0 - published Dec 02, 2007 - no comments (preview)
A revised version of my first chapter I wrote. I realize now I should not have been so quick to publish it. I got rid of the swears and the grammatical errors that I saw. Please, any and all comments are appreciated.
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3.2/5.0 - published Nov 28, 2007 - 4 comments
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