Miss this place. Miss you fellow writers. Hope all is well. That is all.

Alright, now that I have some time, here's what I'm going to say.

You took every little twist we had and untangled them all into a perfect little knot at the end. Not sure if that metaphor makes any sense. Basically, you used everything you needed to. It all makes sense in the story, you took everybody's chapter and incorporated every little thing that needed to be incorporated. You explained everything that need explaining.

I hadn't expected Bill to become a villain but it makes perfect sense. Every character has a part to play and it is fantastic. I love Elvis and Missy's parts especially. You had the baddies be bad and the heroes be good and everybody did their part and it all came out perfectly in the end, and it just feels right. Just thinking about how you made everything come out perfectly boggles my mind.

You especially took Charlie, who has been mostly nothing so far in the chapters and give him an important role, really make him feel likable and awesome. That's the best thing about your chapter I guess, how each character feels real and feels important.

One last thing...YOU INCORPORATED THE FREAKIN' TITLE! That blew my mind. Seriously, genius.

This might be my favorite chapter in all of Storymash. Can't say enough good stuff about it.

Now, all I can say is...WHERE IS EVERYONE YOU NEED TO READ THIS GODDAMN CHAPTER PEOPLE!!!!!

Right now, I only have the time to say this was absolutely amazing, perfect, fantastic, fabulous, the best chapter out of the entire series. I will take some time to say more when I can. You blew it out of the park Wolfram. That was an awesome read.

This first bit has me laughing and loving it. Holy cow Wolfram...but I'll save the rest of my comments for the end.

Man, this is a great classic detective fiction starter. Love it. So many clues, suspects, a good ol boy detective whose seen it all, grizzled and chubby. Awesome.

Hey JD, Really liked your chapter. Really sets the beginning well. What we really need is someone to go for chapter 3, then they can decide which chapter they wish to follow.

Go check out my thread in the Projects forum and sign on to write a chapter to one of the projects. You will be adding your work to the work of some of the best writers on the site, not to mention participating in some of the coolest story lines.

Oldies, newbies, come one, come all, help finish these stories that have some fantastic chapters, all they need are few more to finish up.

When authors notice you've participated in these projects, they may very well take a gander or a look-see at other chapters you've written. Want to get your stuff read? Join a project. Get involved. Comment, comment, comment, write, write, write.

http://storymash.com/f/projects-and-contests/1031/#c_42090

A great start so far! New chapters added to SUDS and Around the World! And it seems Nash may be taking on chapter 3 or 5 of Project Zorro. He says 5 in his comment, but the next chapter up is 3, so hopefully thats the one he's taking on.

Unfortunately, it seems there is only a few of us going back to these projects and checking them out. Where are the other Oldies? Where's some fresh blood?

I'll take the last spot. Not sure if I'll attempt a starter chapter or not, but I will decide and send you one before 3/17, if I decide to do so.

Haha, great continuation! The reveal of the monster/killer is great at the end, a nice cliff-hanger for the next chapter. You added just enough for the fourth chapter, leaving enough to be told in the last two chapters. I really like this cute little story.