The third chapter is up! It was a quick and dirty draft, but it's up. Halfway through the story, we've got the planning and main characters set. In three chapters, we need the reveal of the second group of antagonists, the actual heist, and what happens after. So far so good.

So do I wait for the last variables or just get goin so's we don't slow down too much?

Well Jeezum crow, looks like it's my turn. How many variables do I need, 5? I think I've only got 3 so far.

Ugh. It's my turn now, isn't it? I'm definitely going to need to wrack my brain for this one.

Great job, Crystal.

Awesome start. Love it. Love the characters, especially elvis.

Variable? Guns.

Hah, can't wait to see the first chapter of this one.

Awesome stuff, Aggeloi. It's really fantastic to be back, to write and read and comment with you folks. Black Eyes, the cowboy council(maybe), the bad guys, razor wraiths, this is really good stuff. Reminds me of American Gods, kind of like mythical modern fiction, which is really cool, like we're writing our own mythic tale.

Anyways, this story is really going places. Loving it.

I have returned from the grave of real life and, having realized I miss Mashing, will attempt to become a regular here once again. Look forward to mashing and commenting with all of you.

I meant Stormbird's comment, not wwb's, just for clarification.

Having just come back in awhile, I gotta say this is a pretty great comment. I will try to take a look at a few of your chapters, storm.