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The Day He went to Heaven  by BurningEmber13

I didn't know what to do when I saw those lush forest green eyes staring right into my stormy grey eyes in Science Class. I don't know why I didn't say anything to him  Maybe it was because he held me captive with his spellbinding gaze. He finally looked away and I felt my face turn into a light red shade. I never saw him since but I remember I saw those same precious eyes on television, staring back at me with no sparkle in his eyes like the last time I held his gaze. I felt empty tears stream down my face as they rolled his body away in a stretcher, his soul heading towards Heaven.

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Date created: Jan. 17, 2012
Date published: Jan. 17, 2012
Comments: 19
Tags: eyes, gaze, sadness
Word Count: 120
Times Read: 198
Story Length: 3
Children Rank: 4.3/5.0 (4 votes)
Descendant Rank: 0.0/5.0 (7 votes)