Discussion of "Supernatural" by Broken_Soul
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Broken_Soul 1 year, 3 months ago
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hey guys please tell me if you find a mistake in text.... |
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sara_234 1 year, 3 months ago
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you always say that...lol...its a good story....so thrilling ... |
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Regz 1 year, 3 months ago
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"Outside" is one word, comma after cafe. "She" should be capitalized, "that window" should be "the window." And that's just the first 2 sentences. Also, the paragraphs are crazy long. Cut down yo. |
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Broken_Soul 1 year, 3 months ago
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hey regz thanks for pointing out mistakes i'll keep it in mind next time. and i'll be glad if you will point out the mistakes of my next chapter before publishing so i won't get 0 stars from you....lol |
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sara_234 1 year, 3 months ago
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what a great critic you are....lol |
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Regz 1 year, 3 months ago
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One tries. And it wasn't 0 stars, yo. Give me/yourself some credit |
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Broken_Soul 1 year, 3 months ago
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hahahah i was just kidding .... by the way i am really thankful to you for pointing out mistakes actually i am just learning English not good at it at all so its very helpful ... but i loved your story Muffins it was awesome hahaha truly awesome ... |
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