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Discussion of "Waking in a Nightmare" by BoltNut

1 honeygloom 8 years, 9 months ago Reply

Hi! Great continuation, I read up on Hanging Cloud and I love that you went there. I was going to make Caleb at least a little crazy, just for the added tension. Maeve not only has to fight the wendigo, but she has to try and keep Caleb together too. But over all I thought this was good and I'm really glad you went through the trouble to research and keep the story in line in that sense. Great job! I gave you a four and I plan on checking out some of your other stuff today too!

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1 BoltNut 8 years, 9 months ago Reply

Thanks for the comment and vote. I had a million ideas for how to continue but I was really interested in Hanging Cloud. After reading about her on the internet, it was impossible to not include a character like her in this line. I only hope that her strength can be put into words that do her justice. Thanks for the reads too.

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1 immursurself 8 years, 9 months ago Reply

Love this string off of the Snowflake chapter. Develops the plot well and seamlessly!

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