Discussion of "If You Can't Stand the Heat..." by BigSwifty
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NateG 10 months, 1 week ago
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I like the concept! |
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Cheeseliker 6 months, 4 weeks ago
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Nice interesting and unique character. You describe him and his condition quite well. |
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QuantasCylak 3 months, 3 weeks ago
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loved the concept for its originality! And well written too. Chapters like this get my creative juices flowing. I'm only going to give it a four though, because it was just a basic idea, nothing earth shattering. I almost never give fives. |
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