Discussion of "Hanging Clothes" by Ben_Nett

Awesomly creepy! I hate the inuendo (but only because of the thought that a gal might kill her sister). Great writing.

Wow thanks! I had a different story line in my head when I wrote it but I think I left it open so that there'd be more of a mystery... yikes, just realizing that since I'm not writing the next chapter anything could happen! Whoa, I just joined this thing yesterday and now I'm kind of worried about what's going to happen - if anyone out there is reading this please write the next chapter, the suspense is killing me! I never thought about how the original author might feel if I killed off one of her characters and now I'm in her shoes...

Nice twist to the story. I liked how you used what was provided in the first story and built upon it. Could use some editing for punctuation.

Good job on your first submission :)

Thanks! It's my first chapter and I didn't really understand how story mash worked - I thought I was in a race to get the chapter in before someone else did. Now I know I can take my time which takes the pressure off. Kind of.