Very nice, I loved the hatefilled eyes bit, I can relate to that.

First Class, so much potential for future chapters

Thank you for continuing this little ditty, your effort is far better than mine and very funny. Even funnier perhaps is the genuine 'google ad' at the end, I thought you had added it as a joke

Wonderful light touch on deep subject matter

Please do 'the Girl with a glass eye' sounds like you could have a lot of fun with that one

Excellent