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Discussion of "The Deadliest Disease of all - Life" by Atrus


2 RebeccaLynn 6 years ago Reply

Atrus- I want to know what happens next. I would really like to know where she came from and what her situation was.
I would also like to know more about Atrus. How old is he? How long did he love her?
I liked this chapter and now it's going to bother me until I read more of the story. Good job!


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1 Atrus 6 years ago Reply

Rebecca, this is an attempted rewrite of the original story I began in '99 w/ a co-author playing/writing the part of Katherine and I have since lost all originals.
I do love the characters so much and am attempting to gather my thoughts before continueing.
Thank you for your kind words.
Paul


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1 writerwannabe 6 years ago Reply

Welcome to SM, Atrus. Your first post here is very well written. I like how you've built suspense and begun to develop your characters. You have an interesting writing style...reminds me of some of the classics in literature, a little bit. I look forward to reading more from you.


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1 Atrus 6 years ago Reply

Thank you.
I desire to know so much more about writing, what pours from me is very much like someone handing you a drink of water w/out a glass. I must write as quickly as possible before I lose the images shown to me.
Someday it will all come together -
Atrus


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