This was awesome. my sister is in the marines and has been to Iraq and is going back next year she told me some shocking stories, but I am afraid none as compelling as yours

Thanks ^_^

OMG!! Awesome... man how do you do it?!?!?

this and part one is so good... I am just sitting here wondering hoe could you ever think of this?

I know it can be confusing that's why i perfer to read my poems rather than having someone read them it's not the same... Thanks

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That was really good drew me in

This was good I like the lack of structure and how it almost sounds like you really just woke up and started writing. It was a fresh breath of air.

Thanks

Thanks... I wrote this in 12th grade as an assignment... my teacher would never actually read my work so I did rush it... I think I might try to fix that... what do you think I should do?