Wow...if only I got this much feedback on fiction. speaking of which, A Dark Wind ch.1&2&3 are up readable. I appreciate all constructive criticism. Thanks.

Andrew Lamar

My apologies. a more accurate link to the video: http://operationawakening.wordpress.com/2008/02/21/the-illuminatis-one-world-religion-is-here-wwjd/ .Watch the bottom video. There is only two on the page. Oh! And spiritual=another term for soul(for all the nit-pickers out there).

Did you actually read from the top??? And work your way down??? Tell you what:http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h37/ronaldmccheese/illuminati.jpg&imgrefurl=http://operationawakening.wordpress.com/2008/02/21/the-illuminatis-one-world-religion-is-here-wwjd/&h=269&w=263&sz=22&hl=en&start=27&um=1&usg=__4zJzI8gcFNtXPvPeievKv1wkPd0=&tbnid=vDQitUgeSP-fYM:&tbnh=113&tbnw=110&prev=/images%3Fq%3DObama%2Bconnection%2Bwith%2BIlluminati%26start%3D21%26ndsp%3D21%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DN

Watch the bottom video. Give it twenty minutes, then come back. The election is the modern day gladiator games. I'm I the only person that heard Obama say tonight,"...We have to be ready to make a spiritual sacrifice..."? Ask yourself, what are you willing to sacrifice your soul for???

God Bless the dead, but those people died in war funded by secret societies that worship satan, and intend to rule the world. In the face of something that I'm powerless to stop, this was my way of fighting back. It should start conversation, and make people at least think about whats really at stake here.

...Yea, I actually understand. I realized my mistake earlier. Thanks for explaining it to me. How could I change it?

Andrew Lamar

I understand where your coming from. However, I really wanted this thing to be a complete experience. I have a vision for it, and I really want to make it a 4 or 5 chapter deal. In the future though, I'll def. keep your opinion in mind. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

Andrew Lamar

Very impressive. I don't know if you have experience casting or not, but you described it dead on. Good characters, and good dialogue. I gave it a 4. Keep 'em coming.

Andrew Lamar

New chapters of A Dark Wind are up and running. Give them a look, and offer criticism. Chapter 4 coming soon, and a new story called The Man Across the Hall, soon to follow. Thanks for all the support.

Andrew Lamar

New chapters of A Dark Wind are up and running. Give them a look, and offer criticism. Chapter 4 coming soon, and a new story called The Man Across the Hall, soon to follow. Thanks for all the support.

Andrew Lamar

won't don't you read mine too! They both of ya!