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Discussion of "To Elmswell" by Amina_Hadir

1		Popularplayer 1 year, 8 months ago Reply Great story!!
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2		MrLightening 1 year, 8 months ago Reply Too much dialogue, not enough conflict, the plot moving at snail pace. One and a half stars.
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1		elgenidi 1 year, 8 months ago Reply Good start! I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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1		elgenidi 1 year, 8 months ago Reply To MrLightening, Too much dialogue makes it lively and interesting.I liked it and enjoyed it! 5 stars!
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1		MrLightening 1 year, 8 months ago Reply Too much of anything isn't good ;)
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