Discussion of "Memoir Blues of a Chaos God : Chapter Two" by Althorian
honeygloom 5 years, 4 months ago
This is very vague and I’m not sure where you are going with it. The first chapter already explained that the old lady should not have been alive, hence her unmaking. So this chapter re-iterated that, but to what end? If unmaking erased her sphere of influence, then the future can’t be in danger. Also, I’m unclear on what the levels humans reside on/in mean. This chapter left me confused, sorry.
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Althorian 5 years, 4 months ago
don't worry about it if im honest i really struggled to find a way to continue from the first chapter. i think also shown by there only being one other chapter added to it
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