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Discussion of "Magehunter Journal: January 7, 2009" by Aggeloi

1		Pseudotsuga 3 years, 8 months ago Reply Ooh! Now it gets REALLY interesting! I love the twist... that the Maker is always around, in PERSON, and demonstrably available! I was wondering... why the change in tone, that is, the short, terse paragraphs? It's intriguing... I find myself wondering what has caused Michael to alter his journalling style? Anticipation? Anger? Hurriedness? Unconscious apprehension about being in the same city as the Maker?
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1		Aggeloi 3 years, 8 months ago Reply Glad you like it! As for the change in tone - I didn't realize it was there.
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1		The_Cerebral_Assassin 3 years, 8 months ago Reply Quite the delightful read, and very entertaining I must say. I pray you continue with the story
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1		Aggeloi 3 years, 8 months ago Reply Thank you. That was a nice thing to say.
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1		JD_Renaissance 3 years, 7 months ago Reply Ahhhh... I've been slacking, my friend. I noticed I voted but no comments... Bad, bad me. :D Great continuation. I loved the fast paced action followed by the slight slowdown getting the information out of Dum. Brilliant story. I'm so looking forward to reading more. :)
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1		Aggeloi 3 years, 7 months ago Reply Thanks! Glad you liked it!
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1		writerwannabe 3 years, 6 months ago Reply Better late than never, what? Anyway, that's my story and I'm sticking to it...;o) This entire series is so professionally done, Agg, that we all should feel honored that you are posting it here for our reading enjoyment. To say nothing of the story itself...fantastic! You should find out who JK Rowling's agent is and send this to her...a magic story for adults!!!
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1		Aggeloi 3 years, 6 months ago Reply :) LOL - I feel quite properly flattered!
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1		dkk4510 3 years, 5 months ago Reply lol@WWB, a magical story for adults! Love the idea There were only a few spots that I noticed that were missing a comma or whatnot, but I absolutely loved it. You come up with so many creative things and terms. I wish I was as creative as you are in these things. Great late nite read Aggeloi!
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1		Pseudotsuga 3 years, 5 months ago Reply You know what I just realized I really really like? Only now does someone casually drop the concept of the Maker being continually available... and we don't even know anything about the Maker yet. Recently I've been enjoying the way you gradually, minimally reveal details about a story's world or society. I know in the past I whined about it and insisted on way more description, but now I'm enjoying putting the puzzle pieces together, or just sitting back and being either gobsmacked or deliciously intrigued. It's not a hard puzzle. It's a fun one.
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