Discussion of "Goats for Azaezel" by Acee_Andrade

Oooo! I like this. Great job with the physical relationship between priest and demon. You made it clear, but didn't bludgeon us with it.

I really enjoyed this. The first paragraph especially grabbed me, the way you described the church and the way it smelled "like an old fear, the memory...". I feel that completely, understand it. You obviously have a more developed voice than a lot of the writers here, which is great and is really refreshing. Please, keep up the good work!